Aww this made me feel for Melanie. Poor thing has been through so much! I hope Lucas brings a bit of positivity into her life (yet somehow, I have a sneaking suspicion it will not be quite that simple…)
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Yes, Melanie has had a rough time! I’m going to post a character bio for her later today! But most of it you were able to figure out from the screenshots probably 😛 (Only thing not mentioned is why she and her brother were raised by their grandmother — taken away from an abusive home 😦 )
My favourite part of this was her curling up in front of the grave, hugging her legs to her chest. Such a clever way to use that action! 🙂
I do love that shot! Melanie has been through a lot in her life. The poor thing. 😦
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I mean don’t get me wrong I like Ev but I definitely love the impact Melanie has had on Lucas. He may be young now but he isn’t getting any younger. And life is short, as shown by Mel’s husband and Evelyn.
I do wonder if Evelyn will ever find peace and be able to move on.
Okay, we need to start a campaign: #TeamMel and #TeamEv and see who wins. 😛
Ugh! That was so touching. Love what you did with the sit ups!
Haha thanks, but I can’t take credit for being THAT creative… It’s a pose I downloaded 🙂
So sad. I know she needed Lucas but if Evelyn comes back to life, she’ll have nothing as well. Or at leas I think because she probably doesn’t have family left, no friends and what will she do? I think both Mel and Ev are on the same place. Oh, this is a tough choice for Lucas.
Dang it! Now I feel for Mel! This is so heart wrenching! 🙂 (I smile because I live the drama! 🙂
❤ s. All the ❤ s. I love wordless chapters. At first I though the other boy was a childhood friend. But brother makes sense too. It works both ways.
Oh oh I know this is a bit out there (not my place to say this maybe) but I feel like maybe the last photo could have been color? As in to show how she was starting to live again/color came back into her life.. don’t know if it’s fishy but yeah haha x Lovely wordless chapter once again x
Aw that would have been a good idea, actually! Haha nice thinking 🙂
Aw, hell. I guess I have to be happy for these two to get together now. I won’t tell you how horribly I sobbed when Lizzie said goodbye to Drop Dead Fred. Living breathing people suck! *weeps*
Hahaha well nothing says you HAVE to be happy 😛 I’ve never seen Drop Dead Fred, so your comment intrigues me! Haha
Oh, you should! It’s a silly movie from the 90s about a troubled girl and her “imaginary” friend. For some reason I got really attached to her friend (Fred), heh.
P.S. Great staging for the photos, once again – these silent chapters are fab!
Thank you! I loved doing them! It makes me sad that I don’t have another one after this… But no other situation really “calls” for it… Though I am planning on a wordless epilogue to finish out the story when we finally reach the end!
AWWWWWW! I FEEL for her now! EVERYONE in this story deserves some happiness again!
Hahaha I love to make unhappy characters for some reason. I’m so cruel 😛
Poor Melanie 😦 it really broke my heart as all the pictures from the beginning suddenly shifted to the pictures of her alone.
Aww, I feel bad for Melanie. Looks like she’s been through a lot in life. 😦
Makes me want to hug her.
Yes, she has had it rough 😦 Poor thing!
Aww this was pretty and sad. Melanie seems even nicer and more sympathetic now.
Yes, she’s had it rough! 😦 poor thing
It took me a couple of reads but if I’ve read it right this seems to be a ‘flashback’ to when Melanie was growing up and how she had bet Christian as a child and they became good friends and then dated in high school after Melanie grew up and Christian became a young adult, as well, the two of them got married. Then one day she got the news that her husband had suddenly passed away. So sorry for her loss. In time her best friend helped her heal and then she met Lucas. Look forward to the next chapter.
You got it pretty much perfect! 🙂 This is the story of Mel’s life, up until she met Lucas 🙂 Thank you for reading!
You are brilliant at these chapters. Seriously brilliant. They are quickly becoming some of my favs!
Thank you! ^_^ I loved doing these wordless ones so much!
Your Interludes are so pretty and well done. *Hugs*
Thank you so much! The wordless interludes were always some of my favorites to do ❤
Awwwwwwwwww. This girl. Yeah…she’s had a tough time of things and could also use a bit of fun in her life, too!
Aww! I am happy this chapter moved you but I’m sorry for making you cry! Mel had a very hard time growing up, found her happiness with Christian, then had it ripped away from her 😦
Could she have found new happiness with Lucas…? We’ll see!
Haha it’s the same friend, and that guy was Mel’s brother, don’t worry! 😛
thanks again for all your lovely comments. You’re seriously making me so happy because this story means so much to me. 🙂
Don’t worry, take your time! My story can be emotionally exhausting for sure haha
And I actually never explicitly explain the situation after Christian died, but you more or less got it!
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