Chapter Ninety-Five

Evelyn smiled softly to herself as she emerged from the darkness of her grave and glanced at the empty yard around her.


She tilted her head back and looked up at the stars above. Another clear night. The girl thought happily. Her conversation with Lucas the night before had lifted her spirits considerably, and she found herself feeling more optimistic than ever about their chances of finding the final ingredient. We’re so close…

Evelyn passed through the thick hedge and began floating happily across the backyard toward where the Dionaea Taurus stood. The thought of finding the final ingredient had reminded her that she needed to check up on the plant, as she did every night while she waited for Lucas to join her. Evelyn remembered how excited she’d been the night before, when she’d thought she saw the thing actually move. Maybe next time, the ghost thought to herself as she drew closer to the plant, it won’t be a false alarm…


It took all the willpower Evelyn could muster to stifle her scream.

The Dionaea Taurus had been replaced with an empty, lifeless shell. Its bright green stalk and roots had shriveled and paled to an unpleasant gray, and atop it sat a hollow, cracked skull. Its empty eye sockets stared blankly ahead as its large and once-fearsome mouth hung open, gaping and lifeless.


Oh my God… What happened?! The ghost stared at the shriveled husk, horrorstruck.

We missed it. She realized. It was finally ready, and we missed it. And now… Now, it was too late.


“Evelyn!” She almost jumped at the sound of Lucas’ voice, muffled by the thick glass of the back door.

The girl turned around and saw him in the distance, beckoning eagerly for her to approach. “Ev, I did it! I did it!” His voice sounded almost strained, but extremely excited as he cried out to her.


She drifted forward curiously and passed easily through the glass to stand before him. “What are you talking about?” Evelyn asked him, both terrified and excited to learn the answer. Could he mean what I think he means…?

“The Ambrosia.” He breathed. “The cure.  I made it. After all these years… I finally made it.” Lucas sounded almost like he couldn’t quite believe it himself. His voice was barely above a whisper as he spoke.


“What?!” Evelyn hadn’t needed to breathe in over eighty years. But in that moment, she found that she couldn’t.

Lucas nodded slowly. It was almost like he was in a daze. “This morning… I went outside to check on the plant.” He explained. “And it was ready.”


“You’re serious?!”

Evelyn couldn’t help it. She let out a loud squeal of delight and was unable to hold back several waves of joyous giggles. “This is unbelievable! Oh my God…” She barely managed to choke out the words as she was overwhelmed by the deepest and purest feeling of joy she’d ever experienced.


It didn’t feel real. It couldn’t be real. If Evelyn were still able to have them, she would have believed the whole thing was nothing more than a dream. He did it. He actually did it.

Lucas simply nodded. “I know.” He said softly. “I can’t believe it… How many years have we been waiting for this, huh?” The old man smiled crookedly at her for a moment. “Come on, I’ll show you!”

He began leading her toward the kitchen. His back slumped slightly as he walked, and his pace was a bit slower than usual. Lucas paused to wipe a few beads of sweat from his brow.


“Are you okay?” Evelyn asked nervously.

Lucas nodded. “I’m fine.” He assured her. “Just exhausted… I’ve been working all day.” He explained kindly. “You’ve read the recipe, remember?”

The ghost nodded in understanding, recalling the book’s complex instructions. The Ambrosia took many hours to make, and needed to be prepared under the strictest temperature conditions. He’s been slaving away in the kitchen for hours… She thought guiltily. For me.

But then again, he’d really been slaving away for much longer than that, hadn’t he? Evelyn felt a rush of love and gratitude mingle with her guilt at the thought.

“Here it is.” Lucas said softly. “It looks just like the book said it would, doesn’t it?”


Though Evelyn had not felt hunger for decades, there seemed to be something particularly unappetizing about this unusual dish. It appeared to be a soft and sponge-like cake, with large gray chunks dotted throughout. It sat on a bed of a sticky, burgundy-colored sauce, and the entire thing sparkled with a bright and other-worldly glow.


It looked absolutely disgusting. And Evelyn had never wanted to eat something so badly in her entire existence.

Evelyn was overcome. She pulled Lucas close to her, and held him for a long time. “I love you.” The ghost whispered. “I don’t think you’ll ever understand just how much I do. But this is the greatest thing anyone has ever done for me, Lucas. And you’re the greatest person I’ve ever met… I don’t know how I can ever thank you for this.”


“You don’t have to.” Lucas replied warmly. “Just… live an amazing life. Do everything you’ve always dreamed of, okay?” He paused. “That’s all the repayment I need.”


He pulled away from her then, and gingerly lifted the large plate from the counter, as though it took a great effort to do so. Evelyn followed as he led her back into the dining room.

The next time he holds me like that, Evelyn realized giddily, I’ll really feel it…

Lucas placed the dish on the heavy glass table, then turned back to face her. His large green eyes looked deeply into hers, with an expression that Evelyn found difficult to describe. For a moment, she thought she caught the sparkle of tears glistening there.

He reached out, gently taking both of her hands in his. “Are you ready?”


“Lucas,” Evelyn almost laughed. “You’re shaking.”

The old man’s smile widened. “I’m just so excited.” He explained. “Aren’t you?”

“Of course.” She smiled. She’d never been more excited for anything else in her entire existence.

Lucas glanced down at her transparent hands, still cupped gently in his own. He let out a soft sigh, and for a moment, it looked like he was going to speak. But the old man said nothing, then gently lowered his hands at last.

“I guess this is it…” Evelyn floated toward one of the heavy dining room chairs, taking a seat and looking down at the Ambrosia once more.

The ghost lifted the silver fork from the table beside it, taking great care not to let it fall through her fingers. Picking up objects had always been a challenge for her. But soon… It won’t be anymore. Evelyn thought gleefully as she broke off the first tiny chunk of the Ambrosia and lifted it to her lips.


She wasn’t quite sure what she was expecting.

Before they knew about the Aqua Vitae, when it was just the flower and the fish, Evelyn had attempted to eat many dishes that Lucas had prepared for her. And every time, it was the same. The food would pass through her lips and fall back onto the plate. Or the table. Or through her lap and onto the chair below. It was amusing, and embarrassing, and sad, all at once.

But this was different.

The food went into her mouth – and stayed there. And, for the first time in eighty-three years, Evelyn could feel it. How could such a tiny morsel of food weigh so much? It took all of her willpower not to spit it back out onto the plate.


What do I do now? She wondered desperately, trying to remember how to chew.

The ghost moved her jaw up and down awkwardly and felt the squishy bite of Ambrosia break down into a soft, wet wad. Then, with great difficulty, Evelyn swallowed.

“That was awful.” She shuddered, lowering her hands into her lap.

Evelyn turned and looked over her shoulder to where Lucas stood. “Just keep going.” He said gently. “You can do this, Ev. You have to eat all of it, okay?”


The ghost sighed. “Okay. I’ll try.” She turned back toward the plate, took a deep breath, and lifted her fork yet again.

After the next few bites, things got easier as Evelyn adjusted to the bizarre sensation of actually feeling something again.

But then something else happened – She started to taste it.

The girl groaned miserably. Shortly after her death, Evelyn had found herself missing food terribly. But now, she could not imagine why. This is so weird... Words like ‘sweet’ or ‘salty’ or ‘bitter’ had lost all meaning to her long ago. All she knew was that whatever this stuff was, it was awful.


And a few minutes later, after she’d struggled through the whole thing, Evelyn felt awful.

Her head was spinning, and her body… it was tingling. She hovered gently from the chair as the bizarre sensation continued to spread through her entire form. Evelyn stared down at herself, speechless as something strange and wonderful began to overtake her.


It started in her fingertips. The girl watched in amazement as her transparent hands slowly turned opaque before her eyes, lightening to a soft, pale beige under the bright lights above.


Then, very slowly, it traveled up her arms, down through her torso, and into her legs.

Evelyn let out a cry of alarm as she crashed down several inches from where she’d been hovering just moments before. Her feet slammed against the hardwood floor and she stumbled forward, her legs buckling under the sudden weight of her body.


She slumped forward for a few moments, disoriented. But then, as Evelyn looked down at the floor below her, she realized something. I’m standingThe girl straightened herself slowly, marveling at the sensation of the shoes on her feet and the hard, flat floor below her.


Evelyn adjusted her stance somewhat shakily, struggling to keep her balance, when she felt something soft tickle gently against the back of her neck. The girl turned her head from side to side uncertainly, reaching back to look for the source of the strange sensation. Then she realized that it was nothing more than the hair on her head.

She ran her fingers through the soft brown locks, relishing at being able to feel the silky hair against her skin.


This is really happening… Evelyn’s heart began to race in excitement at the thought, and it was then that she became fully aware of the steady thumping within her chest. Its tempo quickened even more then, and the feeling was almost frightening. She let out a slow, deep breath as she tried to calm herself, and savored the refreshing sensation of the air entering and leaving her lungs.

Evelyn lifted a pale white hand and placed it against her chest, feeling the steady rise and fall with every breath she took.


A sudden stinging sensation in the corner of her eyes shocked her for a moment – then she realized that they were tears. Actual, physical tears. Evelyn did her best to blink them away, and found herself delighted once again by something as simple as merely opening and closing her eyes.


It was overwhelming. It was terrifying. And it was amazing.

Everything was new. It was exciting. It was horribly unpleasant and uncomfortable too, of course… But it was incredible.

Because what mattered was not how she was feeling… But the mere fact that she was feeling anything at all.

After more than eight decades, Evelyn was breathing. She was standing. She was feeling.

She was alive.


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71 Responses to Chapter Ninety-Five

  1. CitizenErased14 says:

    So after 95 chapters of build up (actually, if you include my interludes this is technically the 100th chapter!), we’re finally here! Man, this chapter felt great to write! I hope it was worth the wait!

    I felt a LOT of pressure going into this one, and I hope that it doesn’t seem “underwhelming”, especially Lucas and Ev’s reactions. I feel like they didn’t need any grand speeches or heartfelt words (beyond their brief exchange in the kitchen) because after so many years, they’ve basically said all there is to say already, and they just felt so much relief that a lot of words weren’t necessary. I hope that it worked for you guys 🙂

    Random thought: it was especially interesting trying to think of what it would be like to go from being a weightless, barely-physical being with absolutely no bodily functions to being solid and ALIVE. Talk about overwhelming hahaha (and imagine things like feeling tired, or hungry, or having to go to the bathroom for the first time in 80 years. Not to mention simple, everyday things like using a telephone or driving a car, or heck, even bathing yourself! Also being out in the sun after so long… Wow. Haha Ev will have a lot to get used to 😉 )

    Thank you all SO much for reading! We are five chapters away from the epilogue 😮

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  2. raerei says:

    EEEEEEEE! I loved the hand picture and the feet! Ev has feet! Woot!

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  3. You wrote this so perfectly. Definitely not underwhelming. My eyes got misty with joy as she described all these things.

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  4. Jes2G says:

    I read this while I ate my lunch. I didn’t have any popcorn, but I had chips! lol

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  5. Jes2G says:

    Oh, and uhhh…glad you went the safe route he he.

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  6. theplumbob says:

    Aww ❤ How lovely! What an interesting angle to make ambrosia disgusting lol! To me it always looked pretty delicious 😀 It's definitely going to be interesting to see how Ev adjusts to her physical self again!

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    • CitizenErased14 says:

      I’m giving you a “woah” right now too hahaha that was a reading marathon! I’m so glad you’re caught up! 🙂


      • cathytea says:

        Me, too! I almost stopped at chapter 90 because there was so much that I wanted to think about… This is a really rich and deep work! And, reflecting back, I can see how much mastery went into the creation of the plot! (And I’m now officially #teamGrimGaia ! )

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      • CitizenErased14 says:

        Thank you so much 🙂 (and I love that team hahaha!)

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  7. Wow, just wow! So exciting. I was so tempted to just scroll through the screenshots immediately to see what happened 😀 It took all my self-control to read this slowly and in the right order. Aaaaah, I’m so relieved that it went well. I had so much worries about this.
    Also, Ev is so pretty! I’ve never realized that! Cant’ wait to see her adjusting to her new (or old?) life!

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    • CitizenErased14 says:

      Thanks! Haha I definitely did a slow build up so I’m glad you had good self control 😛 thank you for reading! 🙂 (and yes, she’s very pretty! But she has a very large mouth hahaha)

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  9. iveretree says:

    This is so exciting 😀 Ev is finally back!

    However… I’m a tad nervous about the next chapter D: Reading this, I know exactly what horrible twist I would put on this if it was me writing it. Maybe you’re nicer to your characters than me? Or maybe not… Either way I look forward to the next few posts, although if your story ends I’ll have to cry in a corner until you start something new XD

    (hang in there Lucas D:)

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    • CitizenErased14 says:

      Hahaha you’ll find out soon how nice (or not nice!) I am XD and unfortunately it’s ending very soon! 😦 I’m kind of in denial about it right now though 😛


      • iveretree says:

        That’s so sad 😦 Literally whenever I see the little email telling me a new chapter is up I have a little inward freak out. Do you plan on starting anything new?

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      • CitizenErased14 says:

        I have a second story that I started back in August when I THOUGHT I’d be able to handle two stories at once haha. I have five chapters of it, and then put it on hiatus. When Dust to Dust is over (next weekend! There are only 5 chapters and an epilogue left!) it will be my main story, but with just one chapter a week.

        I will say that it’s NOTHING like this story haha it’s lighthearted and funny (it’s called (Para)Normal Neighborhood). I will probably do more serious stuff again in the future too though 🙂

        Thank you so much for reading and for being so supportive of my story 🙂

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      • raerei says:

        Yes….Paranormal…. 😀

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  11. julyvee94 says:

    Omggggg this was perfect! I am sooooo incredibly happy no one had to die for the cowplant. It seemed the easiest ingridient in hindsight XD yeaaaaaaaaay *does the happy dance*

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  12. That was so awesome!!! And nerve-wracking…I kept thinking Lucas was going to drop dead and Ev would want him to eat the dish! Btw she is beautiful!!

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  13. maladi777 says:

    I was literally yelling at her: “Eat it already before something bad happens!” 😀 She’s beautiful. At last we can see her!

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  14. ninjapigsims says:

    What a momentous occasion! I’m so happy for Lucas and Evelyn. And I think her mouth makes her beauty even more special! What a wonderful thing to finally see her alive and breathing again. I love how you explained her regaining all her senses – it was such a magical moment. 🙂

    Now, I hope she gets to spend as much time with Lucas as possible…I’m worried about his health. 😦

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  15. NoaLyn says:

    Just. So. Damn. Happy. I love you for this chapter!! I almost thought something will go wrong XD

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  16. simz4ever says:

    Wow! This is the one moment I’ve been waiting for! Yes! Yay! Hooray! Yay! Happiness….Is….Overwelming…Lots….Of….Celebrating!!!! 😀😄😆😅😂😃😉😇☺️🙂😊😋😍😜😝😛😎🤗🤓🤑🙃😌

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  17. thebookthief24 says:


    I’m too happy to be dreading whatever heart wrenching thing you have planned!

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  18. medleymisty says:

    All caught up and ready for the next chapter!

    And again – this chapter was really well done. 🙂

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  19. silentwolfy101 says:

    All I can think of is Frankestein. “IT’S ALIVE!” XD

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  20. RipuAncestor says:

    Well, they’ve certainly earned this. My macabre mind had expected the Cowplant to eat Lucas and then turn him into the last ingredient, but it wasn’t quite as gruesome after all. I’m not… entirely disappointed by that. 😀 Lucas is nice, so it’s great that he gets to see his hard work come to fruition.

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  21. Simslover163 says:

    YAY!!!!!!! Ev is back!!!! The ambrosia really worked!!! *Screams with excitement!!*

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  22. whattheplum says:

    BUT WHERE IS LUCAS!?? *panic*

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  23. Lisha says:

    RIP cowplant. Your sacrifice will not be forgotten.

    I cried again reading this chapter. I’m so happy but scared too.

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  24. kaffepigen says:

    For a moment i was afraid that you would make them fail yet again and that she would never be alive! Now i’m very happy and overjoyed that after so many years they have finally succeeded! Gonna read the next immediately!

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  25. Yay Ev is back to the mortal world! I’m so glad everything worked out. I was so afraid for Lucas when I saw the skeleton Cow Plant. Glad you didn’t sacrifice him to it.
    I wonder how long Ev and Lucas have together before he meets Grim?

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    • CitizenErased14 says:

      It was such a relief to finally bring her back! 🙂 You are super close to the end now, so you will see soon what will happen. Thank you so much for reading, again! 🙂


  26. lovesstorms says:

    Ok, I have a prediction now…

    …and then Lucas crumpled to the floor.

    Yeah, I have no idea what you’ll do, but that’s what I would do. lol

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  27. msmarvel98 says:

    You wrote this so brilliantly! I’m sure you nailed the “was a ghost for 70 years and now suddenly alive again” experience 😜

    I just know we’re going to see Lucas on the floor. Pleeeease noooooooo. At least let him see he fulfilled his promise? Please?? 😭

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