Interlude: Evelyn

Posted on July 14, 2015 by CitizenErased14

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56 Responses to Interlude: Evelyn

  1. ninjapigsims says:
    July 14, 2015 at 2:44 pm

    You’re right, it’s very effective to just have a full picture-story! 🙂 Poor Evelyn! Her family was so beautiful, all of them were so talented and good-looking.

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  2. Lux Conant says:
    July 14, 2015 at 2:51 pm

    This is an awesome chapter. I think it worked how you wanted it to. I can definitely see this, like sometimes during movies you see memories without sound or maybe some type of music depending on what it’s about.
    So sad how it happened.

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      July 14, 2015 at 3:10 pm

      Thank you so much for your kind words! 🙂 I’m glad that it worked! 🙂 It was definitely super sad and painful to do 😦 But unfortunately necessary for the story!

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      • Lux Conant says:
        July 15, 2015 at 5:41 am

        I didn’t think you had to do that, that must have been very hard. But then again, it looks like she’s a very important character in the story so she had to be there.

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  3. Wolfy29 says:
    July 14, 2015 at 4:33 pm

    This was an amazing chapter 🙂 I actually started to scroll slower at the fire screenshots because it was so sad and shocking. That was a great way to… not write? LoL. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

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  4. rorygilmore34 says:
    July 15, 2015 at 3:01 am

    This was aaaaaammmaaaazing!! I keep going back through these photos. Scrolling back and forth. Really a great technique.

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  5. Jes2G says:
    July 16, 2015 at 12:27 am

    Definitely a good choice to have no words–I love doing these types of chapters! It was very moving.

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  6. lunarokz says:
    July 26, 2015 at 12:05 am

    This was awesome, no words needed.

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      July 26, 2015 at 12:18 am

      Your comments are so sweet, thank you! I was really proud of that interlude chapter 🙂 I’m glad you liked it!!!

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  7. KitDragonFlight says:
    August 2, 2015 at 1:26 am

    Reblogged this on kitdragonflight and commented:
    So sad, but unique!!!

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  8. Anna says:
    August 2, 2015 at 4:57 am

    A really effective and unusual way to tell this part of Evelyn’s story. And it sets it apart from the present as well in a really good way!

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      August 5, 2015 at 12:52 am

      Thank you! (And thank you in general for checking out my story! haha) This chapter made me realize that I have a hidden love for wordless chapters (so much so that I have another one later in the story). I’m glad you enjoyed 🙂

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  10. cathytea says:
    August 5, 2015 at 6:14 pm

    Love this chapter! I adore wordless chapters and the placement of this was spot-on! Really tells the story effectively!

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  11. munterbaconsims says:
    August 6, 2015 at 5:10 pm

    I really, really loved this chapter!

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  12. Derubelle says:
    September 13, 2015 at 12:53 pm

    Wow no words needed indeed this brought a tear to my eye x

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  13. whattheplum says:
    October 8, 2015 at 12:53 am

    Very cool visuals – must’ve been a lot of work!

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  15. pixalqueen says:
    November 6, 2015 at 7:41 am

    wowza, this interlude was super powerful with just the images!

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      November 6, 2015 at 11:23 am

      Thank you so much! I love doing these wordless chapters and I’m glad you enjoyed it! Also, thank you in general for checking out my story! I appreciate it so much 🙂

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      • pixalqueen says:
        November 6, 2015 at 3:21 pm

        No problem, be prepared to be spammed again when I continue reading (: I really enjoy it and it’s intriguing, nothing like I’ve seen before

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      • CitizenErased14 says:
        November 6, 2015 at 3:22 pm

        Thank you so so much! I’m very flattered 🙂 Can’t wait to find out what you think of the rest!

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  16. beckycat1221 says:
    November 12, 2015 at 6:21 pm

    Loved the Interlude

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  17. medleymisty says:
    November 14, 2015 at 4:07 pm

    Oooh, I do like a good death by fire!

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  18. Senna says:
    November 19, 2015 at 12:35 pm

    I don’t usually see many Interludes in stories, but I loved this one!

    Not going to lie, though: I looked at the third picture, and now I think I want that giant teddy bear.

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      November 19, 2015 at 12:37 pm

      Hahaha giant teddy bears are awesome 😉 XD Thanj you for your kind comment 🙂 I love doing these wordless interludes 🙂 There are *counts* 4 more sprinkled throughout my story, and my epilogue will be wordless too. They are so fun (and challenging) to do. Thank you for reading!

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  19. RipuAncestor says:
    November 28, 2015 at 3:31 pm

    This was so nice! I really like how it illustrated Evelyn’s life a bit. And I especially liked the ending. Partly because it has the Grim Reaper in it, but also because there’s this feel of loneliness, confusion, and sadness told through pictures alone. Also, the pic with Evelyn watching the sky is really pretty and relaxing.

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  20. silverdaybreak1 says:
    December 3, 2015 at 9:55 am

    So sorry that Evelyn and her family loss their lives in a fire. You did a very good job at portraying it. I use tragedies like that to cover up game glitches or computer issues like when I have had to uninstall and reload my games and not all my story Sims could be saved. Did that a lot in my earlier days of playing Sims 3 as glitches and crashes were a common occurrence back then.

    Great pictures portraying what happened Evelyn’s backstory.

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  21. lovesstorms says:
    February 2, 2016 at 10:55 pm

    I’ve thought about doing something like this, but wow. You did it beautifully! Loved every moment. ❤

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  22. livinasimminlife says:
    February 24, 2016 at 7:04 pm

    Wow! This was awesome and moving. I felt like I really got to know Evelyn through this chapter and I felt for her when she died, the confusion and terror of suddenly being somewhere unexpected and realizing you could never go back. You didn’t need words. It worked perfectly without them.

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      February 24, 2016 at 7:10 pm

      Thank you so much! I loved dong this chapter. Actually, there are five more wordless chapters later in the story, because I really enjoyed this one so much. I’m so glad you did too!

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  23. ARoseInBloom says:
    April 29, 2016 at 6:31 pm

    Ugh! No words and my heart is still broken. So poignant without even uttering a sound. Well executed…my heart goes out to her.

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  24. CitizenErased14 says:
    July 17, 2016 at 12:27 pm

    Thank you SO much for checking out my story! I so appreciate it ^_^

    That’s awesome that you explored a similar storyline before! I always loved that concept, so I really wanted to try it in a story 🙂

    Thanks for your lovely compliment on this chapter too! I love doing wordless interludes every now and then.

    Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story 🙂

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  25. Emy says:
    August 22, 2017 at 9:33 am

    Ah I love wordless interludes!! My first serious story had one, and it was super hard to pose. I’m just getting back into the Sims community after a long break, and you’ve come highly recommended. 🙂 x

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      August 22, 2017 at 10:51 am

      Aw thank you so much for checking out my story! It means a lot! ❤️

      I’m glad you also love wordless chapters! I adore them (but you’re right, so much work!!)

      Thank you again and I hope you enjoy my story 🙂 (also, I wrote this story two years ago and had no idea what I was doing — my screenshot quality does get a lot better as it goes haha and writing too! :P)

      Thanks again!

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  26. theduquettelegacy says:
    February 4, 2018 at 8:03 am

    I love how you only showed the pictures of her story!

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      February 4, 2018 at 8:14 am

      Thank you! I really came to love doing wordless chapters after this one, so I do a few more throughout this story (and in my legacy story as well)

      Thank you so much for reading! ❤️❤️❤️

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  27. Deafsimmer says:
    February 14, 2021 at 10:55 am

    Very good screenshots. Sometimes wordless chapters and scenes speak volumes.

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    • CitizenErased14 says:
      February 14, 2021 at 11:00 am

      Thank you so much! I wordless chapters can be challenging but they are my favorites! Thank you for checking out my story! ❤️

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